Three more, in one day? I’m a madman!
I particularly like pages 9 and 11, although the perspective is off on the middle column of windows on page 11. The photoshoppy effects are very temporary, and sometimes kind of cheesy looking. Also, the art on page 10 is a little substandard. After I get a fair chunk of the story out, I’ll go back and prettify it all.

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